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Review:bester_jester says:
Ah lovely.

Your characters are all so well-rounded and interesting. I love that Teddy is a playwrite - so different to how he's normally written!

Audrey and Hugo's friendship is progressing nicely. I feel like it's so soon to be going to Christmas at one's house after just two weeks, but when they've only got each other, I guess there's an exception?

It's such a shame that Audrey's losing weight though. Adds a great element to the plot, but I hate society these days (and in the future!) :/ she was happy as she was before!

Anyway time to stop rambling. Lovely writing as per usual :)

Author's Response: Woah, thanks so much! Well-rounded? Really? That's pretty much the only thing I strive for when writing fanfic because I know I'm rubbish at other things like plot and writing etc. So I'm glad you think so :D And yes, absolutely. Audrey's mother was right about Hugo being very forward about asking her to a christmas dinner after knowing her for such little time. But oh well.

Well, she's losing weight to get back at one of the tossers, not so that Hugo will like her or that she'll become popular or anything. This is still very much a social justice-centred fic and I intend on keeping it that way!
Thanks so much for the reviews (:

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