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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I've just been left so unbelievably speechless every single chapter I finish. I get down to this box and I think how I want to tell you all the emotions and how amazing this is but then I get here and I'm a blubbering rambling mess.

Every emotion you wrote Harry having while telling the story of the resurrection stone to Teddy, I felt that a second before I read it. You're probably going to read this and think 'who's this crazy girl who's a mess over this story' -- Your writing is brilliant. It's so perfect Remus in the way that I just know it's exactly what Remus would want to say to Teddy.

Okay, other stuff! You were defiantly right about Andromeda's actions being explained a little here, and it makes total sense now that I look at things like that.

I love Harry's discomfort about Teddy wanting to be 'just like him' - It really reminds me of book Harry that never wants attention brought to him in a positive way. And Harry's sarcasm every single time Teddy said 'why' was so hilarious.

You probably already guessed this much, but I'm loving this story soo much.

Author's Response: Well I can tell you now that you are leaving me speechless with your reviews! I genuinely don't know what to say! Just - thanks!

Don't worry I don't think you're crazy in the slightest! As a fellow Lupin/Harry Potter/Fanfiction fan I understand completely - you're grand! ;)

I am really glad you picked up on Harry's discomfort at Teddy imitating him, I just felt that was an important little addition, just because it reinforces the Harry we know from the books. I am so glad you think Andromeda's actions make sense here, I was a little worried she would come across as a bit harsh, I don't particularly like her personally, which is mad because she only had about 2 lines in the book, and that's all I am basing it on, that and Remus's comment about how Tonks's family were disgusted by their marriage. But even though I don't particularly like Andromeda, I don't want her to appear harsh or anything less than a loving gran to Teddy, because she definitely loved him and took care of him very well! So I am glad you think her actions made sense here.

Anyway, just thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I am so glad you are enjoying this story :)

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