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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I thought that I would surprise you with giving you a review on this story!

I really liked this chapter. I loved getting to see Louis and Nathan really come to life more in the chapter. I remember the last one they were both kind of learning how to deal with everything and everyone not to mention one another. I was happy to see them having a good time and meeting others. I was quite annoyed with Al and Daniel. There is still something going on with him that I cannot explain.

I loved the descriptions and the time that you put into making the story just right so it not only creates a great picture in your mind as you read, but also so that it flows well and the pace stays steady.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)


Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: :) Thank you!

It's a bit of a slow-burner, this chapter, that fills in backstory and background about the characters and fleshes out their personalities - although I suppose it's needed given the rough deal that Nathan and Louis have been given in the last few chapters.

It might be slow going over the next few weeks as the summer term is always mental, but in the meantime you could always check out Snakes and Ladders, the story of Greg's second year (like Snake Bites, it's about eight chapters in).


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