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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
To be honest, Hermione with one of the twins is not the first pairing I normally go for, but I find it works well because Hermione is a bit uptight at times, and with the twins being rather loose and funny, I think they contrast well with her.

Overall, I did not find the characters to be OOC at all. I think maybe Hermione was a bit giddy at times, but she did have her moments of over excitement in the books as well. Girls get like that in weird situations sometimes, and this is definitely one of those awkward situations for her.

I loved how you had George come back to the school just to prove Zonko wrong. I love his enthusiasm, and I always felt George was more of the rational twin in the books compared to Fred, which is also why I felt Rowling killed Fred in the books and not George. I think you captured George quite well in this story.

In general, kudos to you! I liked this story, and I liked your take on Hermione/George. I almost wish you had wrote a sequel to this, like a chapter fic instead of a one-shot to see what happened to them after this initial incident. Imagine what Fred would think when he finds out! Haha.

Anyways, love the story and I'm glad I read it. :D

-Sara-

Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Hermione with George is one of the most difficult pairings I wrote, and I am glad you liked it.

Haha I am happy you took it as an 'awkward' situation for Hermione rather than her being OOC.

Yeah I have always felt George to be more rational of the twins too! I am glad you think I captured him well :)

I am so flattered by your review! I am happy you like my take on hermione/george :) I'll think about a sequel, but not sure.

Thanks a lot once again for your adorable review!


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