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Review:caoty says:
Hi, I'm here from the Gryffie common room thread~

First of all, this was a *fantastic* idea. Like, I'm actually jealous that I didn't come up with it myself, seeing as I'm in love with all things 'Puffy.

I can totally see Bellatrix being a sugar addict, Voldie having halitosis and Narcissa threatening to divorce Lucius because he was doing weird things with house elves. Somehow you managed to make that all IC, which is some sort of miracle. Well done. That said, though, Voldie's shift to super emo of emoness was a little awkward and sort of... broke the tone and flow of the story for me. It just seemed odd, and unfortunately not in a funny way.
There were also, as someone else pointed out, a fair few typos.

However - overall, this was a fun story that gave me a great big goofy smile. I especially love the last image of the Death Eater/counsellor group hug with Voldie trying not to accidentally knock anyone out through the power of his breath, and Helga Hufflepuff's immortal cookie-related wisdom, and it certainly seems like you had fun writing this. :D

Author's Response: Hi hi, fellow Gryffie!

Thanks, my mind is full of odd ideas. This was just one of them. There's plenty of weird stuff where this came from.

My mission is clearly accomplished if I got a smile out of you. =) That was the purpose of this fic.

I'll promise to tackle typos.

Thank you for reading it! =)

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