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Review:SerpentineOffering says:
There was a lot happening in this chapter which I thought you pulled off well. I think this is probably my favorite so far, it was written beautifully. :)

Poor Paige, distracted by the fact that Draco's gone. Poor Draco, having to leave and having his father arrested. Poor Harry, his godfather dying. Everyone is affected in this chapter which I really liked, it brings the sadness of the events out more in my opinion!

I loved the way you ended this chapter, Paige has always seemed like a very nice character, she cares about others. I love that she didn't care about anything else, that she ran to Harry, she wanted him to feel a bit better. I thought that was a fantastic touch to the story. :)

Great job, Amanda!


Author's Response: This chapter was fun, because I wanted Paige and Draco to be able to have a normal night out. Too bad it couldn't stay so innocent, though :(

You know, I think she is a nice girl at heart, despite what others may assume about her. As I mentioned in a previous response, her compassion for Harry and love for Draco will put her in a tight spot in chapters to come.

Thanks for another kind review :)


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