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Review:Slide says:
Hmm! Obvious conclusion is that Araminta had Gideon's address from the last chapter and gave it when she had to. BUT she'd already been there after the Diagon Alley attack, so she's had it a WHILE. BUT the Mysterious She was desperate so might have given something She'd had for a while. Hmm. Hm. Yes. Of course, if it's NOT Araminta, then SOMETHING'S beating her up.

Action moves along briskly, conversation with Gideon and Arieda is good, though we'll see how long he listens. Poor, poor Gideon - and poor collateral damage Muggle family. Unpleasant subject matter is handled tastefully while still being appropriately horrific.

...I was kind of joking about it being Ivy. I'm now kind of serious.

Confrontation scene is all kinds of melty goodness. GOOD for Gideon, finally taking a stand on her injuries, though being distracted by all the kissy is perhaps not the best for an intervention. BUT ALSO YES ALL THE KISSY.

Oh, Gideon, you poor, broken fool. I think this chapter could also be called 'Gideon Has A Really Bad Day'. More so than usual.

Author's Response: MY LIPS ARE SEALED.

Araminta clearly has a prototype of "The Monster Book of Monsters". She's not learned about the stroking yet. (OOH ER.)

LIPS ARE STILL SEALED.

Very unpleasant. Wasn't planned, but then I figured it would be unrealistic for the Munchers to turn up, see they'd lost their man and then leave peacefully. So unpleasant things happened.

Kissy time! Gideon finally gave in to his feelings, haha. But yes, it was perhaps not the thing to do in the circumstances, but he wasn't going to get an answer out of her either way, so it wasn't a bad move as he got a bit of action out of it which is naturally the important thing right now. Thus making it not QUITE as bad a day as he thinks, though he obviously won't realise this until he's over Louisa and whatnot.

You know, I've just realised, I have far too many characters whose names end in 'a'. I've managed it in both fics. What's all that about?

Thanks for reviewing!


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