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Review:Brittany M says:
Cute story! Well developed and had left me hanging on just the right parts. I do wish the language was a bit more parallel to the books though.. highly doubt Rowling would use the word 'ho' in a Potter novel.. but for the most part it was done well. Also there were about 10 or so grammar errors that I caught.

Entertaining story and good ending! The romance was not overdone either, which I liked. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you Brittnay M.
About the language, I was writing the story for a more grown up audience, thus a little swearing didn't seem out of place. I am sorry about the grammar errors. Do you think you could tell me where they are? I tried to edit it well, but this is my first real fanfic and I haven't got a lot of writing experience. All your reviews and opinions are greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading and I hope you stick with me,

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