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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for slytherin tag!

This was a beautiful piece of writing, just like your many others. I think, even though you're a hardcore Snape/Lily fan, you did a superb job with James/Lily. I could literally feel the love and affection James has for Lily. The story flowed really well, and I loved the dialogues and thought processes. It was all perfect. This was really a sweet little piece and reading it made me smile.

You're such an amazing writer, you inspire me :)

Great work!

10/10

Cheers!
AD
~Recenseo~

Author's Response: Aww, thanks, AD! :) I'm glad the affection between James and Lily came through okay. I had a really good time playing with James and trying to imagine how he and Lily fell in love. It was meant to be sort of sweet and fluffy on top of a darker backdrop, so I'm glad that came through.

Thanks for your very kind review!

-Amanda


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