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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here from the forums!

This piece was fantastic! The only thing I noticed were that you called the Healer 'doctors'.

What I would've liked to see is Remus' feelings towards Tonks. It felt to me that he just married her just for her relationship to Sirius and not because he cared for her. Was there love between the two of them? Or Remus not wanting to be alone?

Other than that, this was a great one-shot. I love the detail you bring into this chapter. The imagery was great as well.

--Perelandra

P.S. Sorry for the short review. I'm at work right now pretending I'm listening to my manager rant while typing this review...oops. Haha.

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you for coming by! I apologize that my response has taken a little while.

Ooh, nice catch. Maybe I'll have to go back and edit that later. Thanks for pointing it out!

I can definitely see what you're saying about Remus/Tonks. I really wanted the focus of this piece to be Remus/Sirius, but I did think a little about it afterwards, and I perhaps could have talked more about the Remus/Tonks ship, too, just to give some more context to their relationship in this strange situation.

Thanks for your very kind review! :)

-Amanda

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