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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
Well, this was interesting. I'm not quite sure where you are going with this, but I got a hint of The Skulls in this story? I don't know if you have seen those movies or not, but The Skulls is also about a secret society, so it just reminded me of that.

I hope you mention in the next chapter who the girl is and who her companion is, but I get it. You have to keep the reader in suspense!

Anyways, I liked how detailed this read despite being written in first person. I think first person can be so difficult to write, but maybe that's just me.

Hope to see more and where you take this fanfic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
I actually resubmitted a different (and better, in my opinion) version of this chapter in the queue just yesterday, so it should clear things up a bit.
I've never actually written a fanfiction before, so if it seems shaky at times, call me out! :)
And no, I've never heard of The Skulls... I didn't mean to copy them! D:
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

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