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Review:academica says:
Hey! I'm here from review tag :)

I think this is a really interesting beginning to a story. You've definitely got me wondering where Louis went, what kind of trouble he got into, and what the letter is all about. I really liked your characterization, especially the way that the Potters and Weasleys treated Louis after his little faux pas. They treated him just as they would any employee while still giving him a second chance with his desk duty, and I think that balance is right in character.

Your imagery throughout this piece was beautiful, especially when you described the moment where you feel like you're going to die and then find yourself relieved that you can go home after all. I didn't spot any technical mistakes, and the flow of the piece went very smoothly for me.

Nice work! :)

-Amanda
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Hey there!

I'm so glad you think it's interesting! I was so worried when I wrote it that there wouldn't be enough in it to hold attention, you know? Ah, gosh, characterisation is so important to me - thank you so much! :D

Thank you very much! I really enjoyed writing that bit, particularly the end - it was much less stressful than starting it! ;) Haha, the lack of technical mistakes is probably down to my beta's editing, tbh, so all the praise goes to her!

Thank you so much for this!

Aph xx


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