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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey! Sorry it's taken me so long to get over here to review your entry - I've been a bit busy, and I wanted to make sure that I could give it my full attention.

I loved this. I really did. Your prose was perfect for the piece - it was dry and witty and very, very engaging.

Nova Spacelove made me laugh on so many different levels. I loved her name. I loved the reference to Lockhart and her backstory in general. I loved her frame of mind and the way she was so frantic to say something - anything to convince Molly that she was the real thing. Initially I really did think she was going to get away with it, when she predicted that the baby was a girl, but then Molly started talking about her five sons and I let out a little laugh. One child too early, Ms. Spacelove. :P

And I loved the fact that you included Molly here. You captured her really well. I'm not sure why Molly was wandering around visiting seers, but I am sure that I don't care. She's bored and pregnant. If I was bored and pregnant and a witch, I might go around trying to see Seers to laugh at them, too! I think my favourite thing was Molly playing along and pretending that she really was concerned about Arthur being faithful - "Geraldine" was great, and the addition of that really made me laugh.

I'm so, so glad that this came out of my challenge. I loved it. Thank you for writing it.

... and conveniently, I've been deliberating about what to nominate for the story of the month! I think I have my answer. ;)

Author's Response: Hi, Beeezie!

Firstly, thank you for creating the challenge! And thank you for this thorough and very kind review. :)

Bahaha, Molly trolling all the Seers. I kind of dipped into my own experience with this. When I was pregnant I was laid up on the couch, sick with pneumonia, and had to get my kicks by leaving people really strange text messages. I don't know, my friends/family probably thought I was really bizarre, but at the time I thought it was hilarious. I was just so /bored/.

Really, Nova obviously did not know a thing about Molly because how could Arthur ever step out on her with a leggy blonde woman? Molly + Arthur = true love.

I'm so pleased that you liked it! And eeep! Thank you for nominating it for story of the month! That made my day so much brighter. :) :) :)

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