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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
Wow. Talk about awkward! This was definitely a type of pairing I never expected to read, but it was totally believable. Kudos to you on that part.

I think you captured just how desperate and selfish can be when they aren't getting something entirely from someone. They turn to another person, but instead of ending it with the original person, they need both to feel whole. One, or even both, of those people end up hurt in the end, and with Dominique's own pain, you captured that quite well.

I love how you also made Teddy feel like a victim in this. I wanted to hate him, I really did, even Dominique for betraying her sister in such a way, but I just couldn't. That's a sign of a well-written story, when those who should be flawed and uncharacteristically bad are sympathized with by the reader.

I really enjoyed this one-shot, and I can only imagine what would happen if Victoire ever found out about their fling.

P.S. I love that you used Zac Efron for Teddy. :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing! I am glad that this was unexpected for you but you still found it believable :)

Ah, you're spot on, I couldn't have explained it better myself, and I am happy to know that you think I captured the scenario well.

Aw this really flattered me that you feel my story was a 'well-written' one where you could sympathize with Teddy's flawed and "bad" character.

I am glad you enjoyed it :) And yeah, I adore Zac xd

Thanks so much for the sweet review!

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