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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Argh, I'm so sorry that its been so long, I had no idea that this was up. And plus, I haven't updated for any of my stories in so long that its ridiculous and I'm sorry! Anyway, I didn't mind that this chapter was short, it gave me a taste of what the next few chapters might bring. And how dare everyone think Dezzy is going out being scandalous! I know how much that might have upset her of course and I don't blame her for running off in a huff. Now, I think I squee'd a bit when I saw Godric Gryffindor's name in this! Amazing job, I didn't know who he was and that was not what I was thinking at all. I'm curious to know more about her reaction to him and what he might do in the future, he seems rather amusing. I'm not so sure if I like her being out alone with Salazar though, I've got a nasty feeling about that bloke, to be honest. You must update soon!
Up next for me, hopefully is "A Force of Wills" and I'd like your honest opinion on it, I'm not sure if its a good chapter or not. :p
After that its my Misfits and then you get some Benjamin Malfoy action! Hope to hear from you soon!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie!
That's good that you didn't mind, because I was worried that people would be annoyed that the chapter was short! I just really wanted to put it up, and leave a cliffhanger for you guys! I thought it was really important that Bea accuses Dezzy of something scadalous, because Bea is actually the sister who is most likely to get involved in something like that. And also, Dezzy is really sweet and innocent, which I'm really trying to get across. That's something that makes her different from Jane, I think. Jane is sweet and kind, but she isn't naive, whereas Dezzy really doesn't know what people can really be like, and is very sheltered and in her own little world. That's why she is so embarassed when Bea accuses her of a scandal, because she is too innocent to even think of being involved in something like that. And Dezzy alone with Salazar! Who knows what might hapen... I just uploaded a one-shot last night, that's another next generation one-shot, so after that is validated and I update LMT, I'll continue with this story. I can't wait for A Force of Wills! I reread the entire story the other night because I love it SO MUCH. and the Misfits and Benjamin Malfoy! YAY! I'm so excited! I'll keep checking back for more from you!
Cassie :)


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