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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Yay! An update - this always makes my day!

I really liked Regulus in Sirius's section. I liked how protective Sirius was of him, but also how Regulus has essentially been brainwashed in Sirius's absence. I really liked the moment when he asked Amelia why muggle-borns and wizards should be treated the same. it was a very innocent question, because he is out in the world now, so he doesn't know there are other opinions to those of his parents. I also liked how Sirius become more and more alarmed because Regulus wasn't acting like himself, but the tragedy is that this is what Regulus is like now. He's changed without Sirius even noticing.

I liked also how you are slowly getting James and Sirius to work out that Remus is a werewolf. Dropping all the hints - Madam Pomfrey taking him away, Mary stating that he has the worst luck in the world and listing all his absences, and even the prank with the first-years, the mention of the full-moon and werewolves. I loved the prank at the end too, and Jack asking "Do I want to know?" too. That was brilliant!

Anyway, keep writing, can't wait for more (of this and Playing At War). Please update soon, hope school is going alright for you! :)

Author's Response: Oh! I'm so glad - your reviews always make mine!

I'm really sorry for this extremely late reply! I've just finished my last exam which means I finally have time to respond to your great review and begin to start writing the next chapters! :) So expect updates soon!

Ah! You've caught the relationship that I was trying to portray perfectly! Regulus is slowly changing - Sirius was always there to act as a barrier between reg and his parents; once Sirius was removed, he was their new target and Sirius just can't slip back into his role as everything has changed. :)

They're getting there - all three of the boys have been brought up in a world where werewolves are monsters and wicked - Remus doesn't fit that 'quota' so the answer just isn't clicking! :P

I love writing the relationship between the boys and the Seventh Years - they really act as role models and... oh I so wish that I could tell you the future plots! Haha!

As I said, I've just finsihed my exams - I hope yours have gone okay? It's so hard to put school first! :S

I'll write the next chapter this week, so hopefully it'll be up soon. Thanks for your continuously amazing reviews.

Keira :)


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