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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Wow.. I think there are few writers who can truly express emotion to such depth like you have here, and who can really write so beautifully. I really loved this - I could feel everything from Lily so strongly and powerfully. And the physical action of her going into the labyrinthine dungeons worked so well with the path of her thoughts. Oh, the different perspective of Lily here was also so amazing - it's hard for me to believe that Lily could have loved Snape at all, but in this, Lily's thoughts are so strong that you really make me believe that she does.

It's just amazing how much you are able to convey in this.. and your writing is just so.. powerful. Like, every single sentence in this actually makes a point. Every sentence is actually important to the story. And the ending was so sad! and heartbreaking. Wonderfully written and such a deep piece :)

Author's Response: Thank you! This is a fantastic review and has definitely brightened a rather down day. I hardly know how to respond to your kind words. It means a lot that you've enjoyed the story so much!

I didn't think the result would receive such acclaim - the story seemed over-long and aimless when I was writing, but that same aimlessness suits the dungeons and the way that Lily wanders through them - her path runs in every direction, just as her thoughts do. I really like that way of reading the story! And I'm also glad to hear that every sentence contributed to the story. :D All my fears dispelled! Thank you for this - I greatly appreciate it!

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