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Review:AC_rules says:
Ah, I love reading about a young and innocent Lily and Petunia! And I think you really captured their young, innocent conversation really well here. Their whole conversation was very... very childlike and sweet and made me want to jump in and give them both big hugs. And also to stop all the bad stuff happening in the future, because... you know, their lives really suck.

The retrospective bit at the end was really poignant too. I really liked it. It summed the whole thing up for me really, Petunia's bitterness only getting worse after Lily died... so it became more than just jealousy. Yeah.

Anywaayys, I really liked this! It was a good read :)

-AC

Author's Response: HELEN! I'm so glad I managed to capture them well. It's always the hardest part of fanfiction. You live in hope of getting it right!
I was contemplating whether to put it on the end, but I decided to since the original idea was what went through Petunia's head when she first saw Harry's letter. I'm glad it fits well!
I'm glad you liked this and thanks for the review!!


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