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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there again!

I love Professor McGonagal and the way that you characterize her. I can just picture her in my head acting just like that and the way that she sounds when she speaks. I can also do the samething with Greg, Glyn, Theo, Zac, Lucas, Neal, and all of the rest. All because your descriptions are awesome! You did a great job keeping to their characterizations in this chapter as well.

I really liked the story line and the way that the plot is slowly dwindling down to a close. It was and has been done flawlessly throughout the entire story. The pace has been wonderful too because you haven't rushed through anything. This is easy to fully understand and get through.

Keep up the awesome writing...it is with a heavy heart that I proceed to the final chapter...

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: I've done that teacher's conversation enough times to know how they pan out. They're usually the sort of interaction where you're about three steps ahead of the kids.

Glad the plot seems to fit properly - never easy to judge whether something as complex as this is rushed and hence hard to follow or, conversely, if it drags on (and on, and on...)

I have to admit to getting totally lucky with Phyllida Spore's timeline, though. The only canon headteacher any time around there, and she happens to share an era with Owain Glyndwr!

Sheriff


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