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Review:distantgalaxy says:
Hi, here with your review tag :)

The tone of the story is really nice. You've got a very distinctive way of writing which is nice, adds a personal touch to the narration.

This chapter was incredibly sad, almost felt myself getting a little choked up reading it actually. It was really cute that in the beginning of the chapter he's speaking to her and the reader can really feel his pain.

All in all, a great start to the story :)

Author's Response: Hi, there.

I'm glad you liked the way that the first couple of chapters were written. The story does start off very sad, but it picks up quite a bit as it moves along.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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