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Review:Owlpost68 says:
Awww. Very sweet lol literally ;) There's only a couple mistakes I picked up on, which was the chapter summary had "turly" instead of 'truly' and there were a few mistakes with going into past tense when it looks like you were doing present. I love writing in present tense too, but it can be hard to keep up sometimes. So this was actually really helpful for me to pick it out myself :) Very thoughtful little oneshot, I can totally picture this happening, and helps me understand that Harry and Ginny, not to mention the others, would just want time to do their own thing with jobs, and not jump right into getting married and a family right after the war. I like Ginny just has her own place, near the stadium, and Harry's doing his Auror thing. It subtle added another layer to the story than just that she was sick. Great job! Haven't read your stories in a while, I'm glad I did :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I do have to fix those mistakes, but I plan to do so as soon as I can, thank for reading and reviewing that was very nice of you.

Many thanks,

Lizzie


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