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Review:lauraf68 says:
Hello Daazle,
Sorry I haven't reviewed since chapter 5, but I have had a bit of trouble finding time to read. Today am taking time to catcht up.

WOW!!! You have such a way with words, I normally don't like cannonesqe stories that change cannon, but this one is so filled with details that I love it!! (10/10)

I'm a bit confused though. So did Snape do something (ie akin to a medical procedure) to Jade when she was younger to help her from a shoulder injury and also has her under a type of Imperio spell to keep her sane?

By the way I love the interraction between Fred & Jade, Jade & Hermione, and Jade & Snape. The banter is wonderful and quite humorous. The, "Go disembowel something." "Oh Look---", had me LOL'ing so much my husband raised his eyebrow and rolled his eyes. I hope she gives Fred a chance and lets Hermione be a friend.

Keep up the good work. Happy Writing!! ~Lauraf68

Author's Response: Well firstly thank you for taking time to read and review.
Yes, Snape did something to Jade many years ago. You won't learn about it until the next story though. And one thing I did like was you saying "keep her sane" I hope that Jade's...unbalanced nature is being noticed, even if it's only been shown a couple times (there will be more later where it should become painfully obvious)
I also do love Snape and Jade, and how they interact with each other. She's probably one of the very, VERY few people Snape enjoys.
Jade just has to give Fred a chance, that's what makes it fun. Hermione though, she's...well she's Hermione and shouldn't be underestimated. Jade likes her, but there's got to be some caution exercised.
o.o this is a very long response

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