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Review:Angelique Aspis says:
"Lavender Brown’s cupcakes as judged by Parvarti Patil" is hilarious! Really, very inventive and fun.

You'll notice that I've corrected Parvati's last name in the quote above; you have a typo there. Don't feel bad; I now have a horrible feeling that I've misspelled her FIRST name in several places in my story :P

That is one major bra, to turn Lavender into a cupcake baker! The frog-bra idea is also very inventive.

I agree with some of the other reviewers; I'm not sure why the girlfriend (or whomever she is) would give Lavender a mocking look, or any kind of nasty look, for that matter. I know that you want the girlfriend to be rude, so how about this: She totally ignores "the help" (Lavender,) perhaps even going so far as to ask Seamus why he's wasting time talking to "the help." This slight of Lavender can either go completely over Seamus' head, or he can look embarrassed about it, or he can criticize the g-friend for being rude, all depending on how strong you want their relationship to be.

Author's Response: Well, it's not so much the bra as it is her staying up all night to learn how to make the cupcakes, the bra is just sort of a psychological helper. But don't tell her that. ;)

Let's face it. Lavender was openly oogling Seamus's abs, any girl in her position would do so. I oogle guys all day, and I've recieved looks of you're-so-obvious from my co-workers, thankfully they're all nice. But you see my point, the girl was mocking Lavender, kind of a jerk move.

I hope that makes sense. :)


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