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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I'm sorry that I did not leave a review for the first chapter, but I was a bit eager to find out what happend next.

I really like the story so far and I like the characters. I thought the background information that you gave about Dean and his family was sad, but interesting. I thought you did a wonderful job bringing the characters to life and making them as believable as they are.

Blanca is a really interesting character and I think she is going to be the one to watch in the story line as it unfolds. I also can't wait to see what else is going to happen to Dean. I feel horrible for him that his wife Lindi passed away.

The description that you use is subtle, but works well in a shorter chapter like this. I thought that it was well balanced with the flow and pace of the chapter. It gives it that extra pop and makes it stand out more while providing a vivid picture in my mind as I read.

I can't wait to see what happens next! =) I am going to add this to my favorites. Keep up the awesome writing!

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: thank you so much for liking the story, and for leaving a review. i hope that you enjoy the next chapters and i have more storylines lined up. so please keep reading. xoxo!!

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