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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Nope! I haven't abandoned reading this story or got bored of it. Life was just getting in my way! But I'm here, and I'm reading, and I'm loving it!

Like you had said, finally, we're getting to see the plot start to pick up a pace and there are actual big events for us to ponder over. I really was trying, while reading the chapter, to pick up on any clues, so I can figure out anything, and that really excites me and makes me want to read more because I hate not knowing things.

Anyway, I shall stop gushing now and start writing sensible things. I should firstly point out that there's one newly introduced characteristic I LOVE about Lily! I love the fact that she's a Ravenclaw but doesn't like studying and finds that getting assignments during the first week of school is quite a burden. Because I honestly believe that smartness and wit is not all about how much you can score on a final but rather how you use your brain to develop yourself and move on forward and things like that. So I love how she believes, even if not confidently enough, that not being someone who's obsessed with studying does not make her any less of a Ravenclaw.

Oh, and how she's obsessed with chocolate! One must always admire a character that cares about getting their well-deserved daily dose of chocolate just as one must admire chocolate and its amazing-ness.

On to other things... like the mystery of the wrecked memorial. I believe I will side with Lysander and insist that it wasn't Lorcan. Although we haven't found out much about him yet, I've always had a soft spot for Luna's kids -almost like Lily does, and I just refuse to believe it was him. After listening -ahem, reading- to Lysander's side of the story, I'm thinking that maybe Lorcan's under a curse or something. Maybe someone broke the memorial and now they're trying to put the blame on him. But that's probably just my brain being overly supportive of the character.

Anyway, I will probably be reading the next chapter later on and will be gushing more. You are brilliant, and this is brilliant, and it wasn't Lorcan. It can't be Lorcan.

Keep on writing!


Author's Response: HI HI HI. I feel like such a terrible person for taking so long to reply to this because it was so lovely and I felt so warm and fuzzy when I got it and I still DO ♥

YES HAI PLOT. Clues...been a while since I read this chapter but I don't think there's anything big in it. Ahhha, I'm glad it excites you :D

Oh please, feel free to continue gushing xD Though sensible things are always good too. YES. I'm so glad you liked that about Lily. One of my goals with this story is to break free of House stereotypes because people just don't fit into four neat and perfect bubbles. I'm a Ravenclaw through and through but I'm also the worst procrastinator :P SO YES. GIANT SMILE AT THAT. You're so right. AHha, new favorite person xD She is a total Ravenclaw, but not a stereotypical one.

I was craving chocolate when I wrote that scene so yeah...Lily likes her chocolate. Well, what girl doesn't? :P

Is it Lorcan? I don't could be...I'm all about breaking house stereotypes, y'know...And maybe Luna's kids can be rebels. Hahahahaha, I really can't say anything on that. I really want to. I really want to tell you everything, but I won't :P

Thank you so so much! Suppose I should write the next chapter...hmm...SO MUCH TO DO. Thank you. Really. ♥


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