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Review:distantgalaxy says:
Hi, DistantGalaxy with your review :)

To start off with, there is odd spacing between the paragraphs that you should watch out for and edit.

It's a cliche plot of the new girl joining Hogwarts, but the way you've written it is so good that I don't even mind. I'm excited to see what's happened to make her transfer and why she's so gloomy. You've definitely kept me wanting to read more!

This chapter also has very nice flow, really easy and smooth to read which I find super important. So far so good! Off to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for pointing out about the spacing, it does sometimes go a little funny, I'll fix it when I can :) Thank you for reviewing, I hope you continue to like it xD

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