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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
We've already had so many ups and downs in our short relationship, and I've spent so much time being mad at him...now that we're finally together, I don't want to fuss and fight anymore; I just want to be with him and be happy.

^ I'm glad that she came to this conclusion because a relationship is really only about the two people that are in it. Yes, sometimes relationships effect other people but if you're happy and the person is good to you then you should be with them and worry when the person doesn't make you happy anymore.

I understand that she wants her friends to be happy too. I think the way Jayde contemplates everything is rather interesting and entertaining because she sometimes thinks like she's much older but her actions are that of a teenager. She still worries about what people say, do or act around her or about her. She needs her friends to accept her relationship with Draco and even apologizes for dating him when she's doing nothing wrong.

I don't think she realizes that you just can't please everyone and things might get worse once they know about the baby because she's a teen mom and people are very judgemental.

"Still," Ginny interjects, "even though we don't have the slightest idea why you're dating Malfoy and we definitely don't approve, we should have at least been there for moral support... that's what friends are for."

^ I thought that was a nice change in Ginny and Hermione but I wouldn't be surprised if they change their tune again. Being friends with Jayde is tricky, especially since they're loyalties are with Harry but I like how you added the element of friendship because it's a big theme in Harry Potter.

No matter what happens, no matter how many fights the trio gets into or anyone else they are able to patch things up and be friends again in the end. I think that's what would happen in the end, they might fight again, they might say terrible things and hate her but if they're her real friends it won't matter and I think they are her real friends.

Nice chapter. I'm kind of secretly excited for this to end soon though! I want even more stories from you. :D

Author's Response: Awww, thank you SO much Deeds!! Your reviews ALWAYS make my day!

I found your comments about Jayde's personality as well as the 'friendship' theme in the HP series to be very insightful... you just opened my eyes to some things I hadn't noticed before (even things about Jayde :D ).

Thank you SO, SO MUCH for this amazing, sweet, thoughtful and insightful review!! (And you'll be happy to know I'm currently working on a Lily/James songfic! :D )


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