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Review:academica says:
Hey! I've thought a lot about checking out this story, and now that I have some time, I decided to come by and take a look.

I think you've done a really job good of getting into Pansy's head and really deepening her character. I really love her subtle uncertainty and the way that you've juxtaposed it with a feeling of superiority and self-assurance, as well as confidence in the Dark Lord's ability to win the battle. It was nice that you really made this about her; she wasn't just Draco's girlfriend or the leader of a gang of girls, but she was really portrayed as an independent soul, maybe even a touch lonely.

Your imagery is really nice, and it helped to set the scene for me, especially when I got to the end where she's at her family home, because that's unfamiliar territory and I have no idea how it would look. I also thought the story flowed nicely, and I saw very few technical errors. I'm definitely hooked, and I'll come back later and read on.

Nice job! :)

-Amanda
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing- I'm so glad that you like the story so far!

I'm glad that you like the direction in which I've taken Pansy's character. She's really very interesting to write - for me she cares about Pureblood tradition and values but cares about her family's reputation even more and I enjoy writing about her struggle to balance the two.

I'm pleased to hear that you liked the description. This story is description-heavy because, as you mentioned, so much of it is unfamiliar territory. We don't know much, if anything, about Pansy's home life or what she did after the Battle of Hogwarts and the way in which the Wizarding world changed after the Battle wasn't really described in the books.

Thanks once again for reviewing and I look forward to your next review!


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