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Review:Perelandra (too lazy to sign in) says:
Back for your second review! :D So sorry if it's a short chapter but I'm at work right now...

Overall this was a great chapter. The humor, like the swords bit and James getting plastic ones was great.

I like the dynamic between James & Lily. Poor James...trying to make things better but failing. Badly!

Also, Peter here...there are moments I forget who he is and what he did. I'm not 100% sure if we know his story with his sister and the I'm going back a few chapters to see.

You have a slight formatting issue. Some of your paragraph's are not spaced out.

Other than that...that's it! :D

Until next time!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Hopefully you've seen my other response - so you will understand why I'm replying late. :)

Awh - thank you very much. :) Peter's accident hasn't been revealed yet - so you haven't missed that part yet! :)

The chapters have just been put through a re-edit, so hopefully the spacing has been sorted!

Thanks for reviewing, Keira :)

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