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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
It moved like water, tinkling in my ears and drowning out the rapid clicks of the grandfather clock's pendulum.

^ OH. Your description is just so moving and riveting and just WONDERFUL. Everything Narcissa describes I can see. Well, everything you describe I can see. It's amazing how you write her. Her thoughts, her action, her fluidity. Everything is just perfect.

I was terrified when we met Lucius, the description of him, how he acted. He didn't even appear menancing to me but just for that one moment when she first laid eyes on him I shudder.

And then window, throwing the chair! So Narcissa! And yet so not Narcissa! I can't even say who Narcissa is because I think she'll do one thing, say one thing or act a certain way and she goes in the opposite direction of what I was expecting.

Oh this is beautiful. I literally want to save this in my google docs so I can read this story forever.

Author's Response: Narcissa's a bit of a wild card. She's clever, but she thinks she's a whole lot more clever than she actually is, so it tends to lead to trouble. She also has this thing where she thinks that if she just tries hard enough, she will always get her way.

Lucius is creepy. Definitely not a looker.

Eee, saving it in your google docs. That is such a lovely compliment! It might sound strange of me to say that, but it just makes me very happy to hear.

^ ^

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