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Review:CambAngst says:
So a thought dawned on me as I was reading this chapter. It's probably the best constructive criticism I've had for you so far, so here goes. I understand the choice that Hermione is making, but I'm still not very clear on why. I really wish that you were giving us more of her thought process. Starting back when Ginny tells her to back off, she sort of took off in a direction and it feels as though she's mostly been traveling on momentum ever since then. It would be really great, I think, to explore the thoughts and feelings that are driving her away from Ron, Harry and the rest of the magical world.

Beyond that, I actually rather liked Ron's reaction to her, even though many would say that it's out of character. He's had time to brood and stew and really ponder their relationship by this point, and it made sense that his thoughts and questions for her were fairly succinct and he wasn't just babbling aimlessly.

Poor Harry and Ginny are sort of caught in the middle of this, although neither of them is really guiltless in the great scheme of things, especially Ginny. I'm interested to see where her conversation with Hermione goes. Maybe I'll get some more insight into what's going through Hermione's head.

And Harry's last line was classic.

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