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Review:CambAngst says:
So far, you've presented a number of different ideas as to how different characters are coping with life after the war. Some of them are fairly normal: Molly and Arthur busying themselves with their daily routines and Harry throwing himself heart and soul into his rekindled relationship with Ginny. Others are less conventional: Ginny struggling to understand what her feeling for Harry really mean, Ron being angry at the world and especially Hermione just sort of fleeing back into the muggle world. They're all very interesting ideas to explore and I think you have really fertile ground here to develop a lot of gripping plot lines.

We haven't seen moody, brooding, angry Harry since the first chapter and I'm wondering whether he'll make a comeback any time soon? Right now he's in this sort of goofy, lovestruck frame of mind, which is a really pleasant place to see him for somebody who really loves the character and wants him to finally find some peace in life. But I doubt it can last.

I liked the way you wrote Mr. Weasley a lot better in this chapter. He seemed a lot more like himself, warm, loving and slightly mischievous. Molly also seemed to be back in her element, forcing Ron to stop and see reason.

I liked what you did with Robbie and the bar drunk. It allowed Hermione to feel safe without any need for magic, something that she probably hasn't felt in a long, long time. His career as a marine is an obvious situation brewing. What is going to happen if and when he gets redeployed? How will Hermione handle not knowing whether he's safe?

Five chapters in and I still think this is a good story. I may get to some more of it later today.

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