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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think this was a really intriguing first chapter! Your descriptive words really make the scene feel alive. It's not much action, but most first chapters aren't. I'm excited to continue reading!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for saying so! I was going for intrigue in the first chapter, I didn't want to give too much away.

The descriptions are hard but enjoyable to write. I never know if I'm doing too much or too little so when someone like you tells me that they made the scene 'feel alive', I can't help but sit here in a bit of awe. That is such a huge compliment, thank you so much for saying that!

You're right, there isn't much action in the first chapter. I wanted this story to unfold slowly and it is difficult holding the action back, but it's a fun challenge. And I'm glad that it didn't stop you from leaving a review!

Thank you so much,

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