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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Another fantastic chapter!!

It was really interesting to learn about the old welsh magic compaired to the regular Hogwarts magic that we've read about for some time now. I was happy to see that Glyn was able to get that little bit of information about it from his father. I also really liked how Ossie told Greg that you can't do anything on your own. Ossie and Matt have this way of shuttling the other kids around in order to help push them to do their best and be their best. It is encouraging to see. I really liked seeing the other two houses come more into play and I am wondering now where is Ravenclaw?

I thought that you did a great job characterizing everyone as usual. I really liked Ossie in this chapter. He is a comforting character. Glyn was awesome too. The descriptions were really well written and I could follow you along as I read. The wonderful, vivid picture is still there.

I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Keep up the awesome writing! =)


Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Ravenclaw's there. You just need to look carefully...

Agreed, I like writing Ossie although he's never going to be a scene-stealer (or Head Boy, come to think of it, he's too much in the background). I do intend to do a one-shot of his and Matt's first year at some stage mind...

Onto the home straight now...

Thanks as ever


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