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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Alurha! Sorry if the review took me a bit long to give!

I thought the chapter was really well done. You gave us a lot of background information just in the first chapter and that gives the reader so much idea on whats truly happening.

I like Aurora so far, I think she's a great OC since she's not too close with Lily. And she seems a very 'out there' character.

The Marauders are very typical ones, not that its a bad thing, but they do have a few different quirks with them. I noticed that they are not all always smirking and they don't talk about Lily that much, so I'm so far enjoying them because as much as I ship James/Lily, I seriously don't think James talked about Lily every minute of his life. Another thing is that they look friendly from my point of view, which is a very good thing.

I think overall the story is very well-written and your first chapter was a really nice one. I do have two or three things that I'm looking out for on the next few chapters, because I really can't judge you that well based on the first chapter. That'd be unfair for you. In any case, I don't think you need to worry about much because the chapter seemed really great and it was very enjoyable. :)

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thank you, your feedback is seriously so appreciated! I definitely will be back to re-request and get your thoughts on my story as it progresses!
Thanks again! :)

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