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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Oh so supreme ruler, you have such oh so supreme talents. I'm still experimenting the different ways I can squeeze those talents and skills out of you. :)

You are a really fantastic writer, did you know? ;)

Let me begin with the summary, it was so true and it just triggered so many different memories from my life that I nearly cried.

From the summary, I drew out that the story was about someone remembering different scenes from their life and pointing out their flaws, mistakes and things like so. But I was wrong, I should've really expected something else from a person as fantastic as you.

The story was really well-done and I really like the way you spun things around. Molly Weasley not remembering things, getting hit by a random bus at night, a mysterious boy...jeez! Its only the first chapter and we've already got so many things to think about.


"Four and a thumb."

She smiled again. "You're a sharp one."

Yeah, like a butter knife.

Best line ever in the chapter! I was laughing so much at the sarcasm. I think you're doing a really good job characterising Molly, but I barely read stories with Molly as the main character so I'm pretty clueless about what type of character she is. :P

So far, I love the story and I am enjoying it very much! :D I hope you write more of this because its a story worth procrastinating for. :P

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: No! No squeezing! It's not allowed! :O *commences major blushing* I love you so much :D

Awww, I'm glad you like the summary :(, but I promise I never meant to make you sad!

I'm glad you liked the different take on it- memory loss fics can be cliched, I think, so I hope you don't think I do that!

As Molly is next-gen, she's pretty much an open book, and I did choose her because she was one of the next-gens who was least written.

Thanks so much for such a wonderful review :) xx


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