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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Woah I really loved this! I have never read anything like it - not only a story featuring Susan Bones, but a story where she tries to maintain a stance of neutrality on the war, and just.. her whole perspective on things was such a good insight into Susan's mind. I loved the different perspective Susan had - how she was hesitant to take action, but did so at the end for Ernie, and the stars and astronomy worked so well in this story too!

I thought this one-shot managed to really strongly convey how school was like at that time, like how all the Hufflepuffs were worried about Ernie being missing, the bird note, and Hannah's nudging that Susan should take a stance. I just really enjoyed how unique this story was - and brilliant writing too! :)

Author's Response: hey MM! Thank you so much for your words and compliments! I'm squeeing like mad just reading this :D I'm really pleased you liked Susan and i'm fascinated by her. Her story is so interesting and intense, her whole family was taken out by Voldemort because they were a strong family and one that fought against him. It just made me wonder who that would affect her and her actions in the war itself. I always saw her as someone who might be able to take action but was terrified of it because of her families history and also she's the last the carry on the Bones' name. It would be a tough decision to make. A

Anyway, thank you so much, i'm also loving the minor characters in Hogwarts era and what it was like for them during that final year. I'm pleased that you thought i portrayed it well! Thanks again!


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