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Review:FriendofMolly says:
LadyM,
I'm sorry I didn't realise you wanted feedback on how you tell your story. It seems that other authors divide the story a bit differently, but divide them they do. A good place seems to be before and after the children arrive. Speaking of children, I loved the interaction with Teddy. But the highlight is a tie between Narcissa learning the Patronus charm, and Draco falling out with his former friends.
Loved it all
FoM

Author's Response: FoM,
Honestly this was written so long ago, I'm not exactly sure what you're referring to. But I'm guessing it's about splitting the story into sections. I've always been fascinated by the Malfoys, so any chance I get to play with them is a welcomed one. Thank you!
~LadyM


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