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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I have a weird thing for Scabior. It must be because of the films. It's something about those trousers he wears. Though you've successfully put me off him by reminding me of what a douche he is.

Intrigued to see how things change - if at all - with Drake floating around. I hope this means more Ariane and Melanie time...

That whole lake thing was weird. I'd love to know if there's any significance to the fact that Gabe saw that vision of Cal killing Tobias again, or whether it's just that he's seeing everything he's seen before so naturally he's seeing that too despite him changing it. I feel like that sentence may not make sense. If not I apologise. Also this has reminded me that we never found out what Urquhart's vision was about ... is that going to be significant or was it just to prove to Gabe that they were genuine, back when it first developed? And I don't remember him standing in the middle of the Canary Wharf lobby yet. This worries me.

I will be pleasantly surprised if the centaurs help. And I'm intrigued as to HOW they will help too...

WHOA GABE VISION excitement. WHOA THEY'RE KISSING UBER EXCITEMENT. Oh Jen. I knew she'd feel guilty. And ... that little speech of Gabe's is the most beautiful thing that any of your characters have EVER come out with, it beats any T/T moment by far. They are so last novel! It's all about Gabe/Jen right now. I hope she doesn't take too long before realising that she's madly in love with him and can't ignore her feelings any more...

Also this chapter seems to have posted twice. Which is odd. :P

Author's Response: So it has! But... but the system is referring to BOTH chapters as 34, it's a literal duplication... So it's not like I double-posted or anything... I'm going to leave that 24 hours or something and then run up a ticket rather than touch things. *backs away*

Jen and Gabe completely steal the show in the last third of FtS, this is true. There's still more to come. I would say 'the best is yet to come', but I do particularly love this scene! And yes, poor Jen is guilty, it was kind of inevitable when your last boyfriend's not all that cold in the ground.

I'd normally be evasive but you can have this one for free: Gabe's just seeing all of his visions all over again, whether they actually happened or not. Also remember he doesn't just have his visions from his own POV (he usually gets them from the POV of the person he touches, so... his vision of the kiss would have been a vision of him kissing himself. Huh. I didn't think about that.) so it doesn't have to have been HIM in Canary Wharf lobby.

We shall definitely see more Ariane and Melanie. This I promise. As for Scabior, Tanith doesn't get to win often against the people around her. If she can't out-manoeuvre Scabior then that's a poor state of affairs. I wrote this scene after rewatching DH and being reminded how he was portrayed. Being a subversive little madam I wanted to write him in all of his oily, despicable glory, rather than the 'bad boy' image the movie (inadvertently or otherwise) gave him. So putting you off him was, basically, a goal! Score.

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