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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Me again, dear!

Characterization: Well, I actually liked Hermione quite a bit in this chapter. She seemed like her regular self, and she was back to being upset at Ron, which makes a lot of sense for the story. I wasn't too sure about Draco's character though. He was a little bit odd, to be honest. I figured he would either be angrier with her or more complacent. The way he acted right now was just awkwardly between those.

Descriptions: Hmm...well, I think there was enough to allow the story to move along, but I wouldn't complain if things were more detailed. I was a little disappointed how rushed the end of the chapter was...

Emotions: I think you got back to a safe place with Hermione's emotions. She's upset with Ron, which is good. I'm glad to see her feeling ANYTHING right now. I'm confused as to why she's interested in Draco's activities, though. Normally, she'd ignore him. Hmmm.

Plot: Well, I'm glad we're moving forward. I'm interested to see where the plotline with Draco goes. And I'm glad Hermione got to spend time with her parents. So...well done!

Interactions: I thought the interaction between Hermione and Draco was a little bit odd, as I mentioned above. I'm interested to see how you're going to get them together when they're so awkward right now.

So far, so good. :] I'll read chapter six soon.

--Emily

Author's Response: Yes Draco and Hermione's interactions are a bit odd as well, Draco is a rather odd fellow if you think about it. I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story! Thank you for the wonderful advice... I will try to be more detailed in the future. Thank you for the great review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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