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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
I'm not sure what you meant by this chapter being a lot of filler -- I think it was chapter full of well executed character development and plot progression. You really did a fabulous job at both!

Your cast of characters never ceases to amaze me. The way you manage to keep characters related to their canon selves, but fit them into this plot far removed from the world of HP as we know it. It's so clever that I often find myself jealous of it.

Narcissa was a fabulous addition to your cast in this chapter, she was every bit the spoiled, haughty woman she is in canon and suited the role of Cygnus' doting daughter perfectly. I think this line: "Nothing, Father. Itís just that one can never have too many servants, thatís all.Ē really sealed her identity in this story and from canon as one and the same.

Regulus. That poor boy. I have so many feels for him. :( I'm just glad that he has Kreacher and Molly to look over him. The caretakers compliment each other well -- Kreacher is all tough love while Molly offers the gentleness of a mother. Together, they seem like they'll do their best to make sure he is okay.

The juxtaposition between the greyscale of the funeral and the luxurious coronation was particularly moving in this chapter because as a reader, we know what your characters do not. All the golden grandeour of the coronation can not make up for the sinister plots behind it and the doom that is sure to follow it.

Everything about this chapter was great! I can't wait for you to update again, I miss little sirius and the marauding gang. :P

Author's Response: Okay, it's not a filler anymore! Haha. The more I read it, the more I realize how necessary it is. The next few chapters will probably be more filler than this one.

I am so unbelievably pleased at how much you like my cast of characters. It's so much fun to be able to switch around and see how all these major plot events affect different characters.

Yes, Cissy is very spoiled and haughty. She will certainly be interesting as she gets older. ;)

Gah, Reg. I just want to hug him so hard! The poor kid. Molly and Kreacher will take care of him, for sure. He will definitely need them. Cygnus is an evil man and he will just play Reg like a puppet.

Yes, lots of sinister plots and doom! So excited to write the downfall of the kingdom, ahaha.

Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm trying to write Sirius and the little Marauders so hopefully I will update soon.


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