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Review:nednedned says:
The "Poor Bastard" was cute! It was funny how Amy was nonchalant about it afterwards. I liked Al and Scorp's dynamic in this chapter, they were interesting to read. It was also funny the way James and Myra resort to pranks to push back their feelings.
One thing of constructive advice, though: while I know that the story warning is mature, there is quite a bit of, erm, coarse language. As in every few paragraphs. Now there isn't anything really wrong with that, but it does get a bit awkward and odd to read where the characters are blurting out the f-bomb and others all the time. It started drawing away from the actual story-line. So keep that in mind, yeah?
Overall, the story is quite entertaining, so keep up the awesomeness! And woah, nice new banner! I read half of this chapter around two hours ago and came back to finish it with the banner changed. It's pretty nice!
Nice job on this chapter :)
Ps, sorry if I wrote a lot!

Author's Response: first of all, i don't care if you write a novel. i would read it and enjoy it. thanks for the advice, i hadn't realized that. hmm. maybe i spend too much time with dirty-mouthed people (such as myself). i will attempt to dial that back. let me know if i'm successful. i love the new banner. it's amazing, isn't it? yeah, i like Al and Scorp too. they're fun to write. thanks for the review and the compliments and the advice! now just hope that i update within the next few months...

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