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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I should get a red flag whenever this is getting a new chapter! Ugh. Anyway, I'm glad that Pansy went into Diagon Alley, with the thoughts of being polite and putting her family back in good standing. I could still grasp alot of her haughtiness and I thought that it was very interesting to see her trying so hard to put on a good impression, even worrying about it a little. Now, I'm not at all sure who this man is but I'm guessing he works for the Daily Prophet, maybe? Its a bit odd how he was following her around and yet I don't think he's dangerous or anything, just a tad strange. I think it might be a good thing that Pansy ran into him again, it sort of threw her for a loop. :D
Also, I really enjoyed reading about the changes you've brought onto the Wizarding world, since not much is known about it. It felt very authentic and believable. Can't wait to find out what she does next!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing once again! Haha- it seems like you posted this review almost as soon as the chapter was posted so I think that you're doing a great job of keeping up with it sans red flags.

I'm glad that you enjoyed Pansy's excursion into Diagon Alley. Yes, she is very worried about making a good impression and this intense desire to improve her family's reputation will play a large role in her later decisions/actions.

You're absolutely correct about the mystery man- he does work for the Daily Prophet. His exact role, though, will be revealed soon! He will also play a larger role in Pansy's life... And will probably continue to throw her for loops!

I'm also very glad that you like the Wizarding world I've created - it's an interesting process, deciding what would have changed since the end of the war and what would have stayed the same.

I'm hoping to finish the next chapter within a week and a half... Thanks once again for reading and reviewing!


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