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Review:pennyardelle says:
So, as you know, I'm reading this on my Kindle, and I've been adding highlights to it as I go to mark down the parts I want to mention in reviews. First off, the story is wonderful. It's so engaging, and you are a fantastic writer. :)

In this chapter, what really struck me is the line about "Why do people think you should be friends years later when you had nothing to do with one another in school?" THIS. Times a million. This has happened to me so often since leaving high school. So, it was brilliant for how spot-on it was, but then the REAL genius of it became apparent to me later. You completely distracted me from the obvious fact that this was the girl that Skone mentioned with how realistically you wrote Rose and Ambrosia's interactions. Really great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *blushes* I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I'm glad that line distracted you ;) Since that was the point of that section. Rose is thinking too much about how silly and annoying the whole "oh let's act like we were friends when we NEVER SPOKE" thing is and doesn't make the connection to Skone's description. Plus, that really does annoy me when people do that (usually on facebook).

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