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Review:daliha says:
Hello so TAG!

Lol sorry I had to do that before I start I have to say that line about her wanting to sparkle, that was pure gold!

Besides that I like this we really get into her head but I feel like it reads too much like a monologue. Maybe a little but of description here and there?

But beside that I'm glad we found out a bit about her past but I feel like the last line smacks you in the face! Like I wish you would have explained the event a bit (in a flash back perhaps?)

All in all I liked it to see a normal student is refreshing. :)

Author's Response: hello:) thanks for taking the time to review my story! i looove cliffhangers and the last one is about Cecilia's past. What i want to do is have each chapter from a different point of view and fill the puzzle of their lives and their "dark" future..
right now i have a lot of things to do so i have left the story..but i'll definately write more:)
~marlita


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