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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
I think it's quite a bit too OOC for me.
I mean, Malinda not knowing about the Trio vs. Malfoy thing, or atleast the war? Hermione having and affair with Kingsley? Them being that short tempered? It's just not..canon.

Anyway, aside from that, it's pretty confusing in general. At times I found myself confused and having to go back and reread to know what happened.

Good plot, with a bit of work it could be really good. Keep going. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I like criticism, good or not! It's been about two years since I wrote this, and going back, I definitely would change certain things about it now (the beginning definitely being one of them!)

I think I picked up with this story as it went on, so please keep reading and let me know what you think!

And it's Malinda, not Hermione, having an affair with Kingsley :) But I hope you keep reading!

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