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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hey, it's me again! This was such a beautiful chapter. I'm really touched by how sweet it is. I just...I have no words. This was wonderful.

Characterization: Caprice was BRAVE in this chapter! Wow, Gryffindor qualities! I actually really liked it. And I loved Lily's bravery too. Well done. I think that Sirius is the best friend ever. His characterization brings tears to my eyes. I absolutely love how you portray him.

Descriptions: This chapter was just jam-packed with action and you really brought it to life. I could feel everything that was happening and see it all. It was dramatic and scary and wonderful. You did a great job.

Emotions: Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I've mentioned this before, but this is the best I've ever seen Sirius written. He's wonderful. I love how much depth you give his character and how sweet he is. I could really feel his pain when he thought Caprice was dead. And I could feel HER guilt when she FINALLY realizes what an amazing friend he is. Great, great job. And I loved the tumultous emotions centering around Nora being so injured. You did a very, very good job. This is one of your best chapters yet.

Plot: WOW. Just...wow. This chapter was explosive. I was on the edge of my seat wondering what would happen with the Death Eaters and why they were there and what they were looking for and what would happen to Nora and just...OH MY GOSH. It was great. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Interactions: The moments between Lily and Cappie were really great. It was surprising for me to see Caprice being the one to tell Lily to run for it. And I'm REALLY happy that James was there to save Lily. And my all-time favorite parts are the ones between Caprice and Sirius. They are hands-down the best moments. INCREDIBLY sweet. They make me shiver. I LOVE how you portray their friendship.

Style: Beautiful as always, my dear. You're doing a terrific job.

Pacing: Ohmgoshconflict. Conflict to the extreme. I wonder what will happen next when the plot suddenly EXPLODED. WOW.

This was an absolutely wonderful chapter. You did so, so well.

--Emily

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