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Review:AlwaysSev says:
Hey! I like the idea of this story, but it could definitely use a proof read -- I just found a couple of spelling mistakes, and the grammar could use some work as well. For example, one thing you might want to change is that in the description it should be "not even smiles" as opposed to smile. And also at one point, you say clam instead of calm. But I do think that your ideas are really good, so I can't wait to keep reading! I love the way that you state the fact at the beginning of the chapter! I think that it makes it kind of fun and light hearted. Nice job!

Author's Response: Hey! I am giving you cyber cookies right now for liking my story;)..Typos? I hate them but who likes, anyways..I changed them! Thanks for reading and liking..:)

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