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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I really like the first chapter and how it opens up the story. I thought it was a unique way to open, giving us such a horrible scene. You did a great job describing it to where I could picture blood on the ceiling and carnage all around.

I really liked the way that you characterized Draco. He is there to do his job. It has nothing to do with his name or who he is, he is just there to do what he needs to do. It was straight to the point. I am sure we will find out more about his character as the story goes on.

The flow and pace of the story was well balanced out and I didn't see any areas of huge concern. The one thing that I did notice is that when the woman returned home she readied her sneakerscope? I think you might have meant sneakscope.

Overall, I really liked the story and the way it started out. I love your description and the way that the story builds in mystery as the chapter continues. I really like the no nonsense Draco that you have portrayed too. I am curious to find out more about Anna.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: thank you, i am glad that you liked it so much.

More is bound to come your way as you read on and I prefer my Draco atm.

I think this genre could be a new rout for me... we shall see.

Thank you for your review


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