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Review:magicmuggle01 says:
Hi

I loved this little story. I could just imagine the look on Draco's face when he realised that he wouldn't be waited on hand and foot by the house elves. And then you throw in the mishap with the way he started to prepare his meal, chuckled at that one.
You might want to go through this again though. You do have one or two spelling and grammer mistakes, such as,

**Draco had got out a dish and started to through in eggs without craking them**

In this bit I think you meant THROW instead of through,. And CRACKING instead of craking.

All in all, a nice story and 9/10.

Author's Response: Hello,
This story is my first and was posted years ago. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes and the constructive critisicm. I went through this story earlier this month and fixed up some mistakes. Sorry i missed those ones.
Thank you for reading and reviewing and for the great rating!!

~LillyLover22~


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